Divya Katdare

[Divya Katdare]

Out of Character: (OOC)
What can we call you: Alana
Roleplay Experience: Nargles, and vault 713
Is this your first character here? no
How did you find out about Nargles? Rach and Gina

In Character: (IC)
Full Name: Divya Katdare
Age: 26
Blood Status: Muggleborn
Profession: Amazon School Teacher
Experience: Teaching since out of Hogwarts
Heratige: Indian and British
Location: Amazon
Appearance: Divya has black/brown hair. She has brown/green eyes. She is very tall and lean. Divya is very "stylish", she doesn't wear the normal button up shirt and khakies for work. She wears some thing a little bit more fun.
Personality: Divya is a very nice, and enthusiastic person. She can also be strict to school children when needed.
History: Divya was born in England. but then moved to India, lived in India until she was nine when her mother's father died, her family then moved to England. They stayed there. At Hogwarts, Divya was sorted into Ravenclaw. After Hogwarts, Divya traveled the world for a year going to France, America, Germany, and Brazil. In Brazil, she found her home and found a job as a Herbologies teacher.
Hobbies: Teaching, reading, and running
Likes: Tomatoes, henna, and dogs
Dislikes: Black, Pizza, and football
Pets: Great Dane named Piloff
Siblings: Adopted brother Evan(13)

Example Post: (No less than 50 words, 3rd person ONLY!)

As Divya stepped off the plane she took a deep breath, ready for her adventure through Brazil. She could already feel the heat in the wind. Divya noticed a young boy holding a sign that said "Katdare, Divya" She walked toards him. He motioned for her to come with him.

[Emily Vincent]

...well this is embarrasing.

Since Becca couldn't get the tag to work for you, I decided to take a closer look at your application. Please, if you would fix:

-You didn't write anything on appearance
-Only one line of Personality? I'm sorry, and this goes for history as well, but we require MORE, especially from adult characters.
-If you'd like an example of the kind of thing we'd like here, please check out Freya Achtland's application. Of course it doesn't need to be AS long, but that's the type of quality we expect here.

Thank you for changing things.

[Divya Katdare]

ya sorry my dad clicked send when it wasnt ready

[Emily Vincent]

Please reply letting me know when you've made the edits. Also, if she was born in India, she would have attended Giza.

[Paige Hamilton]

I edited that part so that she was born in enland then moved india.

[Emily Vincent]

Alana, we need MORE. We need at VERY VERY least five sentences for Appearance and Personality, and three paragraphs for History. If another admin tells you otherwise, please let me know. You barely edited anything!

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